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I'm looking for critiques on my writing, please be as honest as you can thanks.


A rose has thorns.I cut myself on the thorn of the rose because I didn’t pay close attention as I was cutting the bloom off the steam. What is about the rose, the old cliché, how something so beautiful can hurt you. My finger bled only for a short time, later that evening I was reminded again when I squeezed some lemon into my tea, the juice penetrated my cut, and there was that familiar sting again. Not the first time I hurt myself because I didn’t pay attention, and it certainly will not be my last. I’m a slow learner, sometimes I even figure that it wouldn’t happen again. I am often wrong.A rose has thorns.
Awkwardness she stated, the girl in my livi
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ever burning lust
abandoned chance
now all is lost
leave the past, this pain, behind
come with me into the light
you cant miss this
in death is survival
forever more...
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"It doesn't matter what you believe in if you think everyone else is wrong" -
Matthew Good
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What you feel, is ok! it's never gonna change anyway
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past guilt force revival
by death wish or trial
departing in style
the dead walking miles
history certainly will not forget the evil me
~Bright-Pessimism
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"It doesn't matter what you believe in if you think everyone else is wrong" -
Matthew Good
My stock Gallery: ~raine-angelstock
[link]
What you feel, is ok! it's never gonna change anyway
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PANTS A STREET PASTOR!! C'mon you know you wannaaaa
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started here!
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So this is the place I'm supposed to say something creative or witty or funny or inspirational hmm? oh hell you figure it out.
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